Semicolons
Some of the men in the chapter spend a half-hour on the risers; other members spent a half-hour in vowel matching. In one situation, an editor should use a semicolon to join two word segments that are not independent clauses. If the sentence construction features a list requiring a number of commas that would be confusing to follow, it is permissible to use a semicolon as the main unit of separation. Here's an example: Several Barbershoppers from our district attended Harmony College: Joe Williams, Lockport Chapter; Eddie Haskell, Delavor Chapter; Mickey Mounce, Dixon Chapter; and William Scoth, Tiskawa Chapter. Using semicolons to separate the four individuals' names and chapters is a clearer way to present the information. An even simpler method is construct a table: Several Barbershoppers from our district attended Harmony College:
Eddie Haskell, Delavor Chapter Mickey Mounce, Dixon Chapter William Scoth, Tiskawa Chapter
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